- What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
- What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
- Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
- Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
answer the questions above about my website
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2. What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
ReplyDeleteI liked that it was easy to navigate and understand. I would like to see more creativity in your display and more attention to simple grammar. Too many grammatical mistakes.
1. What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
ReplyDeleteI liked the "Words from the Heart" essay. It was easy and fun to read. It may be that I'm biased but it kind of moved me with emotion since I could easily relate with it.
3. Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
ReplyDeleteThe KC3 organizational writing trait was most successful for you. The writing assignment required organization, gathering information and delivering data. It seems to have suited you to do well. The essay seemed more structured than the other writing assignments.
1. Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
ReplyDeleteYou should improve on all. To be honest, it is a lifelong process. However, the ideas, voice and word choice need more focus in your writing. The writing assignments that require you to be creative and elaborative and descriptive are the ones that you need to practice more of. Organizing ideas and using data is easy to do when submitting presentations. Keep working hard at it.